gamsat section 2

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Section II is the written communication section of GAMSAT. Here candidates are given 60 minutes to create 2 items of writing, each in response to a set of stimuli. Each set of stimulus is a group of quotes relating to a common theme. It is likely that the first will be a sociological them like crime, politics, war, or technology, whilst the second theme will be of a more personal nature, such as happiness, friendship or confidence. Although it is not explicitly stated, it is strongly recommended that you write in the format of either an argumentative or reflective essay (depending on the theme).

 

Following are some tips for writing essays

Take a moment to really condsider the quote and theme. Look for deep meaning and broad applications; don't just take it at face value.

Plan your essays - time spent planning is well invested. It will keep you on track and make your writing more focused.

Structure is essential - your essay should have an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Your essay should link together and flow.

Use quality examples to support your arguments and illustrate your topics.

Practice, technique, and quality feedback are essential to improving your score.

 

Following is an example essay from our GAMSAT Guide. It was written by an actual GAMSAT candidate in response to the following quote:

That some should be rich shows that others may become rich, and, hence, is just encouragement to industry and enterprise.
Abraham Lincoln

 

It is human nature that when we observe one with greater means than ourselves it inspires us to improve ourselves. Abraham Lincoln defended the positions of the wealthy arguing that it provided inspiration for other to gain wealth which would serve to expand the nation’s economy.

Lincoln’s sentiments are indicative of a firm trust in free markets and capitalism. Underlying this trust is the notion that wealth is transient. The commonly observed ’90:10 rule’ where 90% of wealth is held by 10% of the population may seem, at first, to contradict Lincoln. However, while the ’90:10 rule’ may remain in effect, the resources are continually flowing as are the members of that top 10%. Just as Bill Gates went from very little to worth billions, so many heirs of old money spend or mismanage their inheritance, removing them, eventually, from the top 10%. The transient nature of wealth supports Lincoln’s position of viewing the rich as a driving stimulus rather than harbouring contempt at inequality.

Further support to Lincoln’s argument can be found in comparing modern China with Mao’s China. When Mao was zealously enforcing communism upon China Landlords and other affluent citizens were persecuted and stripped of their assets. Wealth was redistributed. The reforms were generally seen as positive by the poor masses who hoped this would lead to improved living conditions and a fairer society. Those hopes were dashed as China continued to struggle with rampant poverty and people seemed worse off than ever. With enterprising individuals disallowed from accumulating personal wealth, there was little motivation or means for economic development. However, once Mao passed away, the Chinese government became more liberal and started to slowly embrace capitalism. The impact has been astounding as china is on its way to becoming the world’s strongest economy as it further embraces capitalism. As this has happened, living conditions have continued to improve in China.

Despite the benefits of capitalism, there are many who would oppose Lincoln’s view. There are those who may object on religious grounds, pointing to the pursuit of wealth as spreading materialism and corruption. Some would object on environmental grounds, claiming the exploitation of developing nations by the wealthy leads to damaging phenomena such as the deforestation of the Amazon rainforest and extinction of many endangered species. It may be claimed that materialistic greed is proportional to the pollution and destruction of nature. Others will oppose Lincoln’s argument simply for humanitarian reasons as they believe the ’90:10’ phenomenon exploits and traps the poor and is born of imperialistic arrogance.

Even if everyone’s wealth was equally redistributed, it would only be a matter of time before the 90:10 rule was once again in effect, due to the more enterprising nature of some people and our social frameworks. Indeed, wealth redistribution would likely only stunt development and progress. Lincoln makes a strong argument for capitalism and the accumulation of wealth and its positive side effects. It is important however, to keep in mind the negative side effects of capitalism. While accumulation of wealth is a great economic stimulus, it must not come at the expense of other people or the environment.

 

Such an essay would be rated above average in quality and would attract a GAMSAT score in excess of 65. Note the quality of the structure as well as the candidate's thorough use of examples to support their points. Many candidates struggle to come up with an essay on the spot, but that is only because they have not prepared properly. Section 2 is actually the easiest section to improve your score in! The key to improving your essay results is practice and feedback. If you need your GAMSAT essays professionally marked an graded by expereinced GAMSAT tutors we recommend these guys

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